Devotion

Devotion Page Zero, The cover of the Comic of Devotion, drawn by CM_Zero as part of a collaboration with RobM.

Devotion Page Three, Sketch drawn by RobM as a storyboard.

Devotion is the title of a science fiction spanking story series by RobM. It is set in the Warhammer 40k universe and featuring a group of novices travelling to the Adepta Sororitas shrinehold while experiencing discipline as punishment.

En route to destination various power-blocks and friendships form within the group which has differing effects on the relationships between the girls and each has different interpretations of the animosity between their two superiors and spankers.

Originally planned at nine volumes the series explore spanking both in a domestic and consensual theme. Several backstories have been written which add further history to some characters, detailing how they can arrive at the start of the Devotion story.

Significant Characters

• Esobel Caldari

  The main protagonist through whom almost all observations are made. Orphaned recently after a tragic fire at her home, Esobel is journeying further from home and her horizons than she has ever done before. Allowed a chance to show others her inner strength she displays courage, self-sacrifice, and leadership in the tricky adventures she and the other girls get into.

• Reiche Silvee

  Senior sister and the primary spanker in the series, Reiche is not much older than her charges, whom she treats in a very elder sisterly way. Although open and honest about most things, it's clear she omits much of her recent life from all and appears highly guarded over several secret items she has.

Release History

Only two chapters were written before the original hosting site, AnimeBrats, closed. Fan art was drawn for this series by both CM Zero and Cross Chan. CM_Zero later joined RobM in collaboration to create a comic of the series in graphic novel form. This series may be read on Animeotk.com

Excerpt

Reiche rustled again, her clothing making a soft hissing as it passed over her flesh. The slipper fell with a crack and Yuli moaned slightly between her closed lips.

Yuli twitched slightly, like the other two girls she'd been pressing her naked lower body to the side of the bed to cover her modesty, legs tight together. With the first blow, she shifted slightly and pushed her waist a few inches back and arched her back a little. Within a few seconds of the first, the second blow fell as hard as the first and Yuli twitched again.

This is it, thought Esobel, I'm next. Left then right, cheek by cheek and girl by girl, that’s how these things work. Esobel just couldn't think about what was coming next. She tried tensing the muscles in her bottom but untensed them with a reflex. She didn't know what to do, the spanking yesterday had hurt but the blows had come quick, the pain and pinkness had faded within hours and there was none of this waiting. She wanted to look back, she wanted to turn and see the blow coming as she had with the ruler. She closed her eyes but that was no better, she was straining with all her senses to prepare for the spank but with her eyes closed she couldn't see anything and found that she was screwing her face up. The moment dragged on, Esobel chewed on her lower lip, the waiting was killing her... What was Reiche waiting for?

The slipper came down again as hard as ever, Yuli cried out again with another muffled murmur. Esobel cursed herself for flinching. Reiche was still concentrating on Yuli, maybe it'd be four smacks, then she would move on. Sure enough, the fourth blow landed quickly again and Yuli wriggled, grinding her upper body against the mattress keeping silent this time. Esobel was certain she was next now, what to do though, she pulled her arms in tighter against her body bringing her elbows tight in against her sides, arms squeezing in against her breasts, palms level with her head flat against the mattress. She focused harder on the screw hole. Another rustle of cloth from behind, Esobel flinched but nothing came, the moment dragged on for another few agonizing seconds. Esobel could almost feel the scrutiny on her rear-end, she could almost feel Reiche's eyes on her, taking aim and measuring distance. What is she waiting for? Esobel thought, she can't be waiting for me. It's coming and it'll hurt, why can't she get it over with. Any second she thought, any sec-.

"Aah!!" The hard rubber sole cracked off her left cheek with a stinging smack, right in the center of her bottom, the toes of the slipper tingling her where it was sensitive. Esobel hadn't meant to cry out so soon but the pain was different from she'd expected, a really stinging sensation that quickly turned to a cool burning. The second blow fell again on the same spot on her left cheek. It hurt but she managed to keep quiet and not make a sound.

It bloody hurts that slipper, she thought. The blow to her right cheek came quickly after and landed almost vertically, the flexible sole bending at the toes as the slipper scorched down from top to bottom across the round part of her bottom. She shifted slightly as the second attack to her right cheek landed leaving another short line of pain down her bottom.

Esobel relaxed her fingers from their assault on the mattress and passed her attention onto Risa. Risa had a far away look in her eyes and Reiche, wasting no time trying to use waiting tactics on the impassive novice and instead landed four heavy blows in rapid succession against her. Risa grunted a little with the third and fourth but kept her pose perfectly.

Where's she going now, Esobel thought, back to me, or back to Yuli. A quick glance left confirmed Yuli was biting her own lower lip a little, probably thinking much the same thing. The wait didn't last long, Three heavy smacks landed on Yuli in rapid succession, and without hardly a seconds pause the same three landed dead center on her own bottom, Reiche using the full length of the slipper to great effect placing large patches of stinging punishment down. Immediately the next three landed on Risa too. Reiche was unstinting as she proceeded to spank the three girls at a great pace with stinging sets of three strikes each. The slipper continued to bounce off their bottoms with a distinct whapping sound, a constant and unchanging note in contrast to the alternating squeaks and squeals it elicited from the novice girls as they each danced under the stinging strikes. Esobel was counting the strikes inside her head, Yuli was dancing under numbers seventeen, eighteen, and nineteen. She at least now knew how to prepare for the blows, Esobel grimaced and arched her back as, on queue, her turn under the slipper came and it slammed down its trio of spanks on her bottom. The angled strikes started low, the first catching her flat right across the spot where her legs met the tops of her thighs, the second and third tracking a quick pattern upwards to the top of her cheeks.

Esobel decided to risk a small glance back over her right shoulder, keeping the gesture subtle and trying to lose the turn of her head under her short and thickly curly spiky blonde hair. Reiche had her right arm out at full extension towards Risa, she brought her shoulder back a bit, bent her elbow up ninety degrees, and twisted her wrist a little, dexterous fingers holding the slipper carefully from the sides by the heel. Pausing in that position for less than a second, no doubt getting her aim in, Reiche swung her arm back, snapping both wrist and elbow to impact on Risa's bottom perfectly on the spot expected, over a small rounded shaped red patch just past the top of her legs. The recoil from the blow aiding her snapping motion to return her arm back to its starting position and it came down again and again perfectly, Risa bucking slightly after the impacts, exhaling a little, letting her held breath out shaking the mattress a little more.

Esobel turned her head subtly, raising her body off the mattress a little more on her arms, taking the weight of her body off her breasts Esobel was able to hunker her head down a little into space she created and peer out under her left shoulder peering between Yuli and herself as Reiche shuffled to return to Yuli. Pushing left her arm away from her body a little Esobel got a cleared view of Yuli's bare right hip and Reiche's arm. Yuli mistook the gesture it seems, she immediately pushed her arm over to Esobels and took her hand in her own smiling slightly at her. Esobel smiled back and gave Yuli a loving and supportive squeeze.

– Except a spanking scene, second volume

Links

• Devotion - Graphic novel on AnimeOTK Free Membership required to view images.

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